the visual production value of this is fantastic!!!!!! but the music really doesn't go with anything. The action in the animation is much slower paced than the track and overall the music was overwhelming and distracted me from enjoying the film. Props go for trying to do something a little bit outside the norm but didn't quite work how it should be.
Your illustration style for everything background is great so i was expecting a lot more from the characters. I do not know what are you refering to from the point of japanese legends but the weird pot thing just looked really out of place.
In terms of your choice of music. The track has been used in the animated film "Paprika". Now there's nothing wrong with using something borrowed but upon hearing this song i am instantly reminded of the wonderful animation from the aforementioned film and what i see on the screen is not that. As i already said your art is great but you lack fluidity in your animation. The music track is cheery and lively so it should have some dynamic animation/movements/camera angles and so on to go along with it to utilise its full potential.
It is fantastic for a first flash so 9/10 from me. As you get more proficient in flash try to liven up your illustrations even further.
no real animation icluded as it is all too static with poor humour as well
and people whining about rising gas prices annoy me because HELOOO oil from which gas is made is not a regenerating resource DUH so it's only natural that its price will only go higher as it depletes so shut up and go buy a bicycle
I didnt understand a thing....i mean no idea what is actually going on but maybe that's the charm of it. It's really short but most likely that's a good thing...several minutes of uninteligible penguin gibberish could get a little bit tiring. The penguin designs are quite cute and well done too....overall-diturbingly entertaining
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