Score: 8

"nice"

submission: Drop - interactive toy

date: November 19, 2009

this has a lovely atmospheric feel to it
it is unfortunate that the film is not online as you say because the art style seems nice and i would love to see it

Score: 9

"disappointing"

submission: The red crow

date: April 15, 2009

Your illustration style for everything background is great so i was expecting a lot more from the characters. I do not know what are you refering to from the point of japanese legends but the weird pot thing just looked really out of place.

In terms of your choice of music. The track has been used in the animated film "Paprika". Now there's nothing wrong with using something borrowed but upon hearing this song i am instantly reminded of the wonderful animation from the aforementioned film and what i see on the screen is not that. As i already said your art is great but you lack fluidity in your animation. The music track is cheery and lively so it should have some dynamic animation/movements/camera angles and so on to go along with it to utilise its full potential.

It is fantastic for a first flash so 9/10 from me. As you get more proficient in flash try to liven up your illustrations even further.

Score: 8

"cute"

submission: Asterdroids

date: April 15, 2009

The little robot design is really cute. This was a better use of the character compared to the previous game. If you're planning on making any more why not put them all together as a set of minigames with the little robot since they are really minimalistic as far as games go.